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Jan 30, 2008 22:25:14 GMT -4
Post by nadia on Jan 30, 2008 22:25:14 GMT -4
I think the original one was better. By the way I think you made a typo on the one on the top. At last, someone found one mistake about Krash.  It apparently ISN'T a mistake... but I don't think it makes sense... It does to him though. He's going to be stubborn about this and like his newer version no matter what we say. |
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Jan 30, 2008 23:27:47 GMT -4
Post by krashlanmar on Jan 30, 2008 23:27:47 GMT -4
The newer version is more structured.
The older version probably has more of the raw emotion in it though.
P.S. Where did I randomly get 2 Karma points? xD
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Jan 30, 2008 23:36:25 GMT -4
Post by king arthur on Jan 30, 2008 23:36:25 GMT -4
At last, someone found one mistake about Krash. It apparently ISN'T a mistake... but I don't think it makes sense... It does to him though. He's going to be stubborn about this and like his newer version no matter what we say. Do you two live near each other? |
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Jan 30, 2008 23:47:55 GMT -4
Post by krashlanmar on Jan 30, 2008 23:47:55 GMT -4
Yes, I see her on weekends since I'm away at college though. But I come home for weekends. =]
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Jan 31, 2008 12:11:35 GMT -4
Post by silverhorse on Jan 31, 2008 12:11:35 GMT -4
Yes, I see her on weekends since I'm away at college though. But I come home for weekends. =] I remember you live in New Jersey, why do you have to live near the school?  |
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Jan 31, 2008 12:12:47 GMT -4
Post by krashlanmar on Jan 31, 2008 12:12:47 GMT -4
I dorm at the school... I'm in college |
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Jan 31, 2008 13:48:08 GMT -4
Post by silverhorse on Jan 31, 2008 13:48:08 GMT -4
You have a laptop or you use the Internet in the college library?
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Jan 31, 2008 14:55:33 GMT -4
Post by krashlanmar on Jan 31, 2008 14:55:33 GMT -4
laptop =]
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